Sunday, January 9, 2011

Free Verse-Future-Assonance/consonance

I hear romantic music, I dance to salsa music, I live gospel music, I pray, I cry, I smile, I scream, I dislike, I like, I am who I am. I live throw music, I eat throw God hands, I sleep in God whom. I am who I am. Im talented im many areas of my life, I inspired souls, I like for thee because thee died for me. I sin like a sinner I prays like a failure, I cry like a baby, I swing cause I play, im pure because im still a virgin, I know what it means to stop the cycle because I have stop the cycle. The future starts with me, because I am the future which you life depends on, I am who I am. I am serious as my heart beat; I am flawless like a bird. My name is Sharnay and im so very, fly oh may its a little bit scary boys wants to marry looking at my derrierr, but if he touch it im am going to burry, pretty as a picture, sweeter than a switer, mad cause im cuter than the girl that’s with yall people., I aint got to talk about it people can she it because I know im pretty. All eyes on me when I walk in. don’t hate me because im beautiful, my walk, my talk the way I dress it’s not my fault, don’t hate on me people.

Prompt # 9; Do you think single sex school are a good idea? Why or why not?

Whether boys and girls should attend separate schools is a controversial issue. Some people believe that it brings many benefits. However, others believe that it is not good for the future of our children. I agree with those people who think that children should attend the same schools. In the following paragraphs I will give my reasons to support my opinion.  First of all, children from the very beginning should learn how to communicate with each other. They need to learn social skills, be supportive and understand each other. Second of all, I believe that now women and men should be treated in the same way. A woman nowadays has the same rights as a man. She also wants to make a good career and succeed. So, it is essential in the modern world to understand that knowledge has nothing to do with a sex. Every one has the same access to the knowledge and experience and it is only up to a person how hard he or she  wants to work to reach his or her goals.  Another important aspect of this is that if children attend separate schools they do not have common interests. They do not know what a person of an opposite sex likes, how he or she spends her or his spare time, etc. I think that it is not good for a long run. Some of them will create a family someday and they most likely will not have anything to share. They will not have common interests. They will have different friends and opinions about things. We had such experience a few centuries ago. Women grow up their children and men worked and gathered in the men’ clubs in the evenings. I think it is not the way it should be. A family has many beautiful moments to share together.  To sup up, I think that children should attend the same schools because it will help them to become great, attentive and kind persons. Moreover, they will learn how to respect each other’s interests.

A Poem Ballad-Love-Personification

My unknown, she was the best I love, her above all family members I would have giving my soul up for, until the day I find out she was only using me and taking avenged of me. She stole from me, she lied to me and she played me as if I was a crook on the streets, she was unknown in my eyes when she deiced to give me up, which im happy she did, because I had and is having a better life without her, she negative never positive, never did she once call and check up on me, our asked me if I need something, she stole my money and never gave me a piece. She s a crock to the system she the devil, she is unknown in my eyes, she’s nothing I would ever want to become, she lied and told me she loved me but she really meant I just want to take avenge of you. She never liked me, I don’t understand why she carried me in her whom for nine months she should have not had me, knowing she couldn’t love me, her part in my heart has vanished and I can honesty care less about her, and when she gets old and try to depend on me am going acts as if I have know idea who she is and let your feed, cloth and bath her self, because she has been replaced in my heart. She is unknown in my eyes.

Accomplishments

One of the most important accomplishments in my life so far is the day I graduated middle school with a diploma and three awards for history and science. This was not only important to me it was also important to everyone in my family. This amazing achievement showed me that I could do anything I wanted if I try hard enough. It showed others how great I really am. The day I received my middle school diploma was a very exciting day. A lot of people did not believe I would make it through middle school and graduated. But it was so amazing. When others realized that it had really happened, it gave them courage to strive for their goals and achieve them. For years before I went to middle school I struggled in my classes. And if I could not raise my grades I would not be able to pass to the next grade. I have been trying to study, solve problems and work out the problems that were giving for homework but I was unsuccessful. With my aunt help I was able to be successful. This mad my haters have so much more respect for me. When I received my middle school diploma, it was honestly one of the most important days in my life because of what took place as a result of it. It made me who I am as a person. this achievement taught me just because it seems you won’t make it, it does not mean you will not make it, the impossible is always possible if you just believe in your self even if know believes in you.

Good habits improve our physical, emotional and financial health. promote 1

One of my habits is exercising daily at 7; 30.  My family and me improve our physical health by working out to a work out DVD, then begin to exercise are muscles. Improving our physical health is very important in my family. Many of us don’t want to be overly bigger than are average weight for our height.
I am longer than my average weight for height, my average weight suppose to be 130 because my height is 5’2 but I weight 150 I am overly larger than I what I should be. I am larger than my average weight because I chosen to eat junk food instead of Healthy foods. Before I could overcome a problem, I must admit there is a problem and understand the reason for its existence. Many people, when confronted with issue or anxiety, either deny its existence or fail to adequately investigate the reason its existence.
As to the first issue of denial, very few people think they have no fear regarding their health. Without exception beginning people are very conscious and aware of their fears, but they don’t know why they are afraid. Running, jumping and walking is an activity that involves mental and physical skills. Without the practical experience, there can be little behavior change.
You can visualize, think, and dream all you want that you can ride a surfboard. But it’s the practical, hands on experience that enables you to paddle out, stroke just enough to match the speed of the wave, stand up, and trim position as you ride the swell onto the beach. So come on get involved and exercise daily. Work on your health, which will lead you not into cancer, because of physical outside appearance. Work on your emotional health because we all know when you know you look good you feel good.
The more you eat healthy foods the less money you have to spend on fatty foods or fast process food which leads you  into bankrupt, because you deiced to pay for some fast process food instead of buying some healthy food that can improve your weight loss. Everyone experiences some degree of frightens when it comes to their weight, and physical appearance before, and during. 
There is not one person in your appearance that would not feel some frightens if she or he were in your place, so take heart. You are not alone we in this together. Practice is one of the most important factors in confident of your health there is no substitute for actually practicing your physical health. The more experience you have working out, the less likely you are to be frighten by your health the more you do it, the less frightening it is.

Education

We can make education more interesting by songwriter creating useful lyrics. Lyrics should be about education and how it has an importance of gaining understanding for life experiences. Music can be one of many tools to help high school students remember a math formula.  The music that’s song about in today’s generation is bad. Instead of making love songs that only weakens the minds of students, songwriters should influence, gain and inspire high schoolers the importance of education. One error we make is making the wrong decision.
Looking foolish in the eyes of others. But by making the mistakes is the learning process of knowledge we gain. If students would come to school everyday with their supplies pencils, pens and erasers ready to take notes and asks questions, we would not need to make education more 0interesting so students can stay in school.
If they would do as they were told, we would not have to find ways to help interests high schoolers in to something they are going to need to succeed in college and through life. In the 70s they didn’t have Internet of anything we had, they had to go look for information through books. We can get on the Internet and let someone tell us how to do a problem. They became very smart because they used their common sense, which a lot of students don’t do.

Persuasive Writing Prompts 4

Across the country, public places such as libraries and museums are now smoke free environments, and restaurants are required to have separates smoking and non-smoking sections. Some smoke free advocates are mow campaigning to ban smoking in all restaurants and bars. Many cities suffer from serious smoke problems; because it affects your health it doesn’t help it. My mother smokes and drinks soda and she had to go see a doctor and find out her lungs are and a very bad shape. And they are weak. If she centuries she will be died very soon.
Many people believe that smoking is good because it helps stimulate their mind. But all it’s doing is killing their brain cells. My brother during high school began smoking and he is addicted and it’s hard for him to stop because his body became used to it. For centuries people have wondered smoking of its effects and affects. Many educators argue that every child that smokes damage their brain cells. Some aren’t learning enough in school because of smoking.
A researcher shows that the average American smokes 24/7. many junior high and high school around they country now require students to spend a certain number of hours each term doing volunteer of  work or community service to stay out of areas to stop letting students smoke. Today in society you are required to take a drug test. Many educators argue that every child in every school have access to tobacco. Many days now students are able to get drugs from their parents.
Many parents requires their children to smoke with them rather than smoke behind their backs, which makes no since because how can you sit with your child and smoke with them knowing the effects that they are making, which can destroy their lives. Drugs are an increase in school across the nation now conduct targeted searches of student lockers and backs. Although the Supreme Court has ruled that public school officials have the right to search students they have reasonable cause to suspect weapons or drugs.

My Goals

My goals I plan to accomplish through a college education is success. I plan to be successful in my major, classes, performances, physical health, and in my college experience. I expect a college education to help me become successful in my future. To help teach, lead and give back to my community. I was born in California all my life and all of my 18 years of living being raised in what you would call a foster home, I know a college education will teach me the ways of life, through knowledge of success. If I am taken out of a bad Environment, place into a knowledgeable Environment knowing I will do right, and be successful because some college university gave me a chance, to let me successful succeed and to accomplished my goals through a college education.

The Fire My Autobiographic

It is a Sunday morning about 5:30am and my family and I are just waking up because we usually go to church at 7:10am. I’m in the bathroom getting dress. My aunt is in her room doing my cousin hair.  And my uncle is taking a shower.  And suddenly someone comes in   rings the doorbell. I run to the door and I say with a smooth soft voice who is it? The man says its Keith the next-door newborns. I said how might I help you. He say please excuse me but there is a fire on 89 in van ness you have 30 minutes to get out you’re house are your going to burn.
I ran actually to the hall way in scream it’s a fire on 89 in van ness hurry we only have 30 minutes I smell the smoke. My aunt hurries and grab a few things my uncle hurries and grabs a few things I run to my room in on my bed is my bible and on my dresser is my awards so I grab them and run out the house into the car. Thinking this can’t be happening.  I begin thinking while my parents are driving. Many times you don’t have a chance to grab or get anything.
I first item I would grab is my black wallet. Because it is a family generation wallet that has been past on throw out my mother family and it was given to me. It is very important to me because that is the only gift my mother actually gave me.  I the second item I would grab is my bible. Because its something I try to live by daily it is a very big important part of my life. It makes me a better person within my religion, which I am a Christian. It helps me get throw repeated challenges.       
The third item I would grab is my award to remind me of how gifted I am. Because it is a reminder when I’m down and family and friends tell me I won’t be anything nor achieve anything.  It reminds me that I will achieve success and the future.  I will become all that GOD wants me to become. Little do they know their going to be working for me, But my awards is special to me it is like a photo album and if it was to burn that memory couldn’t come back and be restore within my mind. It is like a lose memory I have no clue or proof on what I have done in my past to so my family in the future.


unlike the others my Short Story

The setting of the unlike the others took place in a small town called Inglewood in 1993 outside of the window of Joyce baker room. There was Joyce looking outside her window talking to GOD. Describing her life and how he mad her unlike the others. Joyce had her small purple radio playing smooth but soft jazz. Which brought in new ways to describe her emotion with feeling to GOD. Joyce character was more straight forward and structure, as she would talk to GOD as if they were face to face. This was a period when Joyce emotions used symbols or colors. The character image in this story was a black African American young lady.  She wears a bright yellow dress with yellow sandals. Her hair color was black she wear her hair in a ponytail with bangs in the front. On Joyce face she wear makeup, black eye liner and light pink lip-gloss. Through Joyce’s life she always grew from her experience. The issue of this story is Joyce been raised like every other kid but she is unlike the others from family to friends At the age of 13 Joyce move out of her mothers home to live with her aunt. Joyce was raised in what you would call a foster home but they treated her like if she was one of their owns. She had everything a kid could every want, games, money, family and love. But all of those things are what made her so unlike the others. Though she had everything the way she saw things were different from others. Many people would think negative or talk crazy when things went wrong she simply though positive and through her growing he inspired and help others. She could relate to many others situation and help others through theirs. She was known through school, church, face book and her community. Joyce had the ability to help everyone with GOD by her side; she was strong, loveable and patient to all. One thing that mad her unlike the others was being a virgin at the age of 19. Many people would laugh, judge and talk about her because she was a virgin. Joyce knew who is was, and she knew her purpose in life, which always mad her unlike others. Joyce always had a positive view on situation even when no one else did. Joyce wasn’t perfect but she knew how to work things out. When people would be mean to others she would be the one to stop and help them. When people would talk mean or call her names she would simply say ok and go away from that person. She would do her best in her classes, community and at her home. She would talk to her friends and they would tell her she’s the greatest person they knew she wouldn’t quickly understand how she could be inspiring others, when all she would do is be herself, and her friends would say that’s all it took her being herself. That’s would mad her unlike others.

God First

God first, when you are in the midst of darkness, death, pain and brokenness, keep searching for the light and do not fall short. All bad works out for the good, and great works out for the best.
Okonkwo as a young man brought honor to his village. His fame rested on solid personal achievements. He fought the great wrestler name Amalinze. They had the same skin. He had to suffer from his father Unoka’s mistakes. Okonkwo was not a cruel man, but his whole life was dominated by the fear of failure and weakness. His first son, Nova, was causing his father great anxiety, at 12 years old, for his incipient laziness. He had three wives and eight children. He took seed-yams from Namibia and promised to grow them. It was the week of peace and Okonkwo had beaten his first wife. Everyone heard his wife crying, and they reported to the king and they punished him. Years passed, seed-yams grew, and the children got older. Mr. Brown comes to visit the king and to preach the gospel of Christ. The commissioners are angry.
The information in the novel is based on the life of Chinua Achebe. The events are true. The story of Okonkwo is in a way the story of our culture.
Chinua Achebe wrote this novel in order for people to get a better understanding of life. He wants people to be exposed to a different way of seeing the world.
Achebe decided to tell this story because he wanted people to understand never to put and idol before the one and only God. When you are in the midst of pain, tears, and drama, stand strong and keep your head up.  All bad works for good and good works for great.  Hold on to your faith  believe even when you don’t see. When trouble comes your way praise your God. All dreams come true if u want them to. Reach for the best and your life.

Saturday, November 27, 2010

describe the most luscious, decadent dessert you can imagine

the most lusciuse dessert i have ever image is a cheesecake with strawberries, mixed the nuts and cholate all over added apples and whip cream on top. like thats so amazing to eat. i known its unhealthy but its the best i can image because everything i just wrote above is something i add in every dessert i get. when i go to sizzlers and they have ice cream i always add cookie in crams, mixed with gummy bears, nuts and cholote syurp.  i like going out eating alot of fatty food most of the time its dessert, even though i know its unhealthy.

relationship with animals

i  have a relationship with my animal name papi. this animals is a doy its 3 year old and it was 100 pounds it very small and it has a broken leg because it have run into the street on octember 4 while i was in the bash bathing my youngest sister desi. and my cosin jasmine open the door and papi ran out the door and ran across the street without looking boths way and next thing you know a car drove past fast and it didnt stop, it just kep going. i rush papi to the hostel as soon as i could. i was wearing a yellow bright t shirt, with blue jeans and yellow and white shoes. my uncle took me and papi to the hostpital and they people put him on the bed then take care of papi they told me that papi would not be able to walk i cry because thats was my baby every friday after school we would excerise by running through the neiborhood until the sun set. so i began to stretch papi daily and he soon was able to walk with the grace of GOD.

teenager fad

 this was quoted from a web site ""With all the publicity around extreme celebrity slenderness, many teens and adults have turned to fad diets to lose weight rapidly.""  many teenagrs feel like if you dont have a small waste of big booty and a preety face youer not pretty. many teen used pills, to loose weight because they had a fad of being slim. many guys describe how a girl post to look, act and talk like. and many boys that look up to the super model way for a girl to look like they put girls into a box. teenagers have many fads girls we tend to have a fad of how we smell, look or act like. we had fads about emotions of who we love.we have a fad about alot of stuff. how to get over things, which way should we go, left or right, if were place and an odd position we tend to look for a better choice.

music video

the video  keri hilson. pretty girl rock its about her being beautiful telling other girls dont hate her because shes beautful which a dance called pretty girl rock. she plays many chacters form the the black women to sing to the group tlc with left eye.

favorite movie matilda




“Matilda” is one of my favorite  movies it was directed by Danny De Vito.  this movie  is about a little girl name matilda whos a smart little girl who likes to read books. and she not like her family. she smarter than her family and her family doesnt like the fact shes different.matilda developes brain powers. so when ever her father, mother or brother yells at her and a mean way she has the power to slap the door on them. . ''Before she starts school, she is left all alone in the big empty house. Meanwhile, her father goes to his horrid used car shop, and her mother goes to play bingo.''
At age five-and-a-half she's  began solving double-digit multiplication problems and  began reading  mobby Dickens books.. She love to read and study. So when in the morning came  Matilda's mom goes out daily to play bingo and her dad goes to his business with her brother going to school, Matilda goes to the library daily to read. She wants to go to school but her parents don’t even notice that she is old enough to go to school. they believe she  is four and they called her a liar when she told them that she was fve in a half.""Unfortunately, her neglectful and deeply stupid parents, Harry and Zinnia Wormwood are too wrapped up in their own little lives to care, or even to notice that their daughter is a genius, in love with books and with learning.""  Many Things change, when Harry Wormwood, who is a very crooked used car salesman, sells a car to Miss Trunchbull, the headmistress of Crunchem Hall and is very impressed with her warlike approach to school, and permits Matilda to go. However Crunchem Hall is not an ordina""
""But Matilda finds a single light in warm-hearted Miss Honey, the first-grade teacher who recognizes the girl's remarkable skills - including a very special talent - to move things with her mind. Matilda uses her ability on her real enemy the Trunchbull. Miss Honey discusses this with both Miss Trunchbull and Matilda's parents, neither of whom are impressed by this""
""she wills the chalk to write upon the blackboard, what is supposedly a message from Miss Honey's dead father. The result of this is that Miss Trunchbull leaves town, under a barrage of (not real, of course) missiles fired from the classes. Miss Honey gets her home back, and Miss Honey gets to be the principal of Crunchem Hall. The Wormwood family has to flee the country because the FBI are aware of Mr. Wormwood's car dealings. During a last scene, Matilda gets her parents to sign adoption papers, so she can stay with Miss Honey forever."" thats the end of the story. some of this was taken from a essay on the web but i quoted it.

modren life without cells phones

without cell phone in this mordern would its hard to descriibe what it would be like because not every student has a  cell  phone because not all parents can affort it. now most students does have a cell phone and many of them get angry when their parents take it away to punish them.  with out mordern cell phone the world itself would not gain so much money because the source is what makes the money. everyday there is something new made. and if daily nothing was mad were would kinda be a porr nation. they goverment and rich class depend on us to make them money they dont care about us. if i didnt have a phone i would be sad because withiout cell phones we cant connect with each others. if we didnt have cell phones we would have to walk to each other house to talk to them, thing would be different.

·Foreign country

it i was to go to a foreign country it would be nigeria.  many nigeria people have their own way of talking which is like english but different. the form they speak in is english but the way the talk it  is different. i would travel to nigeria and learn about their culture and what they do on their daily lives. i would like to grow up and live like them to experience a different world i live in. to undestan someones else life.

typical day

A typical day in my life would to wake up with all new grace and mercy and being forgiven for my sins. to make some breasfest for my faimly, go to the park or spen time with a friend, read a book, go to the  movies, go skateing, be on the computer, play with my sister, work , do comunit service. there are many things i do on a typical day in my life, im just never sitting at home unless i want a break away from everybody.

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